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Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23 by Agentpenguin15

Created 05 Dec 2013
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
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  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23
  • Mini Series: Jedi Survival #23

Note: If you have no idea what in the world this is, then DON'T START HERE!!! Click on my name and look for the creation called: New Series: Jedi Survival, and then start from #1. It is very important that you read it, so all of the next creations will make sense. Pic 2: My vision continues to fade and my head aches. My arm feels like it's been trampled on and been set fire to. I try to stand, but my legs and muscles don't obey me. I felt like throwing up. The darkness that had covered my entire right bandaged arm just stayed there. From the outside, it looked only looked like a blackened arm, but in the inside of my body, the pain was flaring up. I could feel the darkness crawling it's way towards my heart. Pic 3: The pain suddenly dies down ever so slowly in my body, but now I feel tired, weak and woozy. Images slowly enter my head. I saw all the times I had when I was a padawan, I could literally see my master standing right before me as if he were right there. I wanted to reach out and touch him, when suddenly he is shot from the back by the bounty hunter that took him away from life. Then finally, I saw Rachel. She was standing in front of a river on a fresh green hill, with the sun beating down on her. She turned around and gave me a warm smile. Suddenly, it all turned black. The images were going away. I was starting to come to my senses. I looked up. My vision was very faded and dark, but I could just make out the dark figure standing before me. Pic 4: I gasped for air. The dark figure seemed to stare right into mine, as if he were studying the effects of the darkness on me. I managed to say a few words. "Please... don't do this.... help.... me..." I croaked with a dry voice. The dark figure just stood there. I heard his voice in my head again. He seemed to just chuckle once. With all my leftover strength I reached out to him, when out of nowhere he moved his leg in a sweeping motion and darkness lashed out and hit me from the right. Pic 5: He then just stood back, and watched by impending ordeal. With my vision going completely black, I slumped to the ground, with no strength or life left. Only one image flashed across my head as the darkness on my arm did it's affect - Rachel and her warm smile. You may have noticed that I'm not saying things like 'Ryan did...' or 'Ryan said...' The reason being is that I'm not going to write in third person anymore for Jedi Survival, I'm going to write in Ryan's point of view. Just a head's up. :] Please rate, comment and please check out some of my other creations!!!

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